Revision on Writing a Narrative Essay - JSS3 English language Lesson Note

What is a Narrative Essay?

A narrative essay is a type of writing that tells a story from the writer’s personal experience. It has a clear sequence of events and includes details that are meant to engage the reader.

Structure of a Narrative Essay

Introduction:

   - Introduce the topic or the main idea of the story.

   - Include a hook to grab the reader’s attention.

   - Set the scene and provide some background information.

 

Body:

   - Usually consists of three paragraphs.

   - Describe the events in chronological order.

   - Include vivid details and descriptions to make the story come alive.

   - Develop characters and setting to enhance the narrative.

   - Show, don’t just tell. Use dialogues and sensory details.

 

Conclusion:

   - Summarise the main points or events of the story.

   - Reflect on the significance or the lesson learned from the experience.

   - End with a memorable or thought-provoking statement.

 

Writing Process

1. Pre-writing:

   - Choose a topic: Select an event or experience that is interesting and significant to you.

   - Brainstorm: Jot down ideas, details, and key points about the topic.

   - Outline: Create a rough outline of the introduction, body, and conclusion.

 

2. Drafting:

   - Write the first draft without worrying too much about grammar or spelling.

   - Focus on getting the story down on paper.

   - Ensure the events are in chronological order.

 

3. Revising:

   - Review the draft for coherence and clarity.

   - Check if the narrative flows smoothly from one event to the next.

   - Add more details and descriptions if necessary.

 

4. Editing:

   - Correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling mistakes.

   - Ensure the sentences are well-structured and varied.

   - Check for consistency in tense and point of view.

 

5. Finalising:

   - Write the final draft.

   - Read it aloud to catch any errors or awkward sentences.

   - Make any final adjustments.

 Tips for Writing a Good Narrative Essay

 

1. Start with a Strong Hook:

   - Use an interesting quote, question, or an intriguing statement to grab the reader’s attention.

 

2. Show, Don’t Tell:

   - Use descriptive language and sensory details to show the reader what happened instead of just telling them.

 

3. Use Dialogue:

   - Incorporate dialogues to make the story more engaging and realistic.

 

4. Keep It Organised:

   - Stick to a clear structure with a beginning, middle, and end.

   - Ensure the events are presented in a logical sequence.

 

5. Reflect on the Experience:

   - Explain why the event was important and what you learned from it.

   - Connect the story to a larger theme or message.

 

Example Outline

Title: My First Day at Secondary School

Introduction:

Hook: “I will never forget the feeling of butterflies in my stomach on the first day of secondary school.”

Background: Briefly mention the anticipation and excitement of starting a new chapter in life.

Body:

1. Paragraph 1:

   - Describe waking up early and getting ready.

   - First impressions of the new school environment.

 

2. Paragraph 2:

   - Meeting new classmates and teachers.

   - The mix of emotions: nervousness, excitement, and curiosity.

3. Paragraph 3:

   - Highlights of the day: memorable moments, challenges faced.

   - How you overcame the initial nervousness and started to feel comfortable.

Conclusion:

- Reflect on the significance of the first day.

- Mention the lesson learned: stepping out of your comfort zone leads to growth.

- End with a thought-provoking statement or a hopeful note about the future.